Movie-Juno The Movie of Family

[chakee23-29]

       

                           
         One week ago. I went to see The Movie at The Major Cineplex. The movie's plot is reflected in America teenage society.

 Let's see the plot.
       

         Juno is about a fifteen year old girl named Juno. She is pregnant because she had sex with her close friend. But she choose to protect her child. And she was made steadfast by the will power of her family and her friends.
           This movie makes feedback the issue of conceiving at school age. Juno doesn't tell you at conceiving at school age is a good story. But Juno is  about a girl who wants to be responsible for her doing. And she can be steadfast by herself.
                                           
                                           Juno's Actors
                                       Juno Macguff --- Ellen Page
                Pualie Bleeker(Juno's Husband) --- Michael Cera
                             Mark/Vanessa Loring --- Jason Bateman/Jennifer Garner
                                     Juno's Parents --- J.K. Simmons/Allison Jenney


Other movies in this month

Sex and The city Carrie's back! For everyone who are sex and the city's fan. Don't miss!

The Dark Knight The return of the Batman. It's the follow part of "Batman Begins"

Las Vegas The big city and sin city. Let's see the true story of"Las Vegas"

The Chronicles of Narnia:Prince Caspian Three children are come back! But then they come back with 'Prince of Caspian'

Iron Man Based story on Marvel comics. It's about the world's greatest superhero 'Iron Man'
                    

[TBob]

Great start Chakee!  I will show you the corrections you need to make tomorrow.  Then you need to click on "Modify" and change your post. 

[TBob]

One weeks ago, I have went to saw see (the sentence is already past tense because of "went") the movie in at The Major Cineplex. This movie is name Juno. (We don't need this sentence, it will be the title of the article)

The movie's plot is reflected to in America teenage society. Let's see the plot.

Juno is about the a fifteen year old girl named Juno. She is pregnant because she had a sex with her close friend (two words). But she choose to protect her child. And she was made steadfast by the will power of her family and her friends.

When This movie show in the cinema. It's makes the (feedback is uncountable) feedback to about the issue of conceiving in the at school age. Juno don't doesn't tell you the at conceiving in the at school age is the a good story. But Juno is narrate about the a girl who wants to be responsible for her doing. And she can be steadfast by oneself herself.
                                          
                                           Juno's Actors
                                       Juno Macguff --- Ellen Page
                Pualie Bleeker(Juno's Husband) --- Michael Cera
                             Mark/Vanessa Loring --- Jason Bateman/Jennifer Garner
                                     Juno's Parents --- J.K. Simmons/Allison Jenney
                    

Good work Chakee!  Now click on the modify button on your first post and make the changes I've shown you.

[chakee23-29]

Thank you teacher. I have to change.

[TBob]

check your spelling and check to be sure you finished all my comments!!!!!

[chakee23-29]

  I'm sorry.

[TBob]

Finished....but I think maybe you copied some from the interent