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The popular television show right now is Academy Fantasia or AF.It is a reality show which young men and women in age between eighteen and twenty-eight years old come to fulfil their dreams of being a singer.It is a franchise programe from Mexico. These people will come for an auditions to be selected as the twelve final contestant.After that they will live together in a house where they will learn singing , acting and dancing lessons.Their everyday lives will be televised twenty-four hours on a television channel.Each week they will be given songs to sing in the concert on every Saturday night.They will be commented by three commentator for their performance.Their scores are based by telephone votes from audiences.Each Saturday the one who has the least votes will have to leave the contest.The programe will last for around three months until there are only five contestants left.The one who has the most votes will be the winner.He or She will get big prizes and become a famous singer.
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