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« on: June 22, 2008, 04:00:55 pm »

                                             School’s  football  field

In the first day I came to School. I usually saw something change but, not like this time.

What's happening to our football field? Shocked The place that used to be the football field is
becoming a dirt bike track. All of the grass was gone but filled with construction cars and bike ramps(soil hills).
   In May the weather in Thailand was terrible.It was raining everyday and every where especially
in Bangkok. So the grass was gone. There will be no football games on the field. I was sad.
   Why they didn't fix this problem before the school started the new semester? When it will be finished?
A lot of questions were in my head. I asked some of my friends. "I don't know when they will be finish."
said my friend. Then I asked the teachers and they said the football field will be finished before Satit games.
 That's better. I thought I had to wait until next year. I see workmen working hard everyday.
"That's alright I can wait."I said to my self and I hope the weather will be better than this. Smiley

Thank you for reading my story.

Aum no.4 2/10

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« Reply #1 on: June 23, 2008, 04:52:00 pm »

Very good work Aum!!!!!  You wrote news about the the football field.  I was thinking it was a dirt bike track too!!!!   Huh?

Here are some changes you need to make!

                                             School’s  football  field

In the first day I came to School. I usually saw something change but, not like this time.

What's happening to our football field? Shocked The place that used to be the football field is
becoming the a dirt bike track. All of the grass was gone but, filled with construction cars and bike ramps(soil hills).
   In May the weather in Thailand was terrible.There It was raining everyday and every where especially
in Bangkok. So the grass was gone. It There will be no football games on the field.I was sad.
   Why they didn't fix this problem before the school started the new semester? When it will be finished?
A lot of questions were in my head. I asked some of my friends. "I don't know when they will be finished."
said my friend. Then I asked the teachers and they said the football field will be finished before Satit games.
 That's better. I thought I had to wait until next years. I see workmen working hard everyday.
"That's allright I can wait."I talked said to my self and I hope the weather will be better than this. Smiley

Thank you to for reading my story.

Aum no.4 2/10

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« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2008, 09:36:13 pm »

TBob I have changed it already. Am I finished yet ?
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« Reply #3 on: June 27, 2008, 03:46:36 pm »

Aum,

Very good work!  I think you are the only student to write about the school.  Students have forgotten the newspaper should be mostly about the school.

You are finished!!!!
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