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Chocolate
Chocolate is a South America plant. Old tribes are ate it a long time ago. It was found at the same time Christopher Columbus found America. And it publicize to any country went to every country. In Thailand they grow in the south of Thailand.
The people think chocolate is not good. It is a bad. People think it makes them fat. Yes it is the real chocolate makes them fat. But chocolate that you eat it not real of chocolate. It is milk chocolate or white chocolate or any chocolate. It has a sugar or any more to fat and that is what makes you fat.
Chocolate is good for your health. When you eat, it to makes to you happy. It makes you blood good and anything for good yourself. But it makes you fat, if you don't exercise. So, you don't eat much chocolate. And you should much exercise often.
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