Very good work Ming!!!!!!
Here are some changes you should make!!!!!
"The life and internet"
Now , I always play on the computer and internet. Especially when I have to do my homework . Because the internet has more information than the library has and its information is more up-to-date than the books in library. The important thing is internet can work very quickly , just type the key word in web search engine then results will show. While , searching information in the library , I have to walk around to find the book then read through , so It's it takes too much time.
The another reason is online games . I play online games as same as the other persons. I am allowed to play it when I have a long free time such as on weekend. The online game I'm playing now is " Luna Online ". I have been playing this game in the last school holiday. It is very funny.
In fact internet has a lot of advantages and disadvantages. Such as in business everyone uses the information on it for to help to make decisions quickly, in on the other hand , the information on it can destroy their business if they use it in the wrong way.
Nowadays the internet is important. It make everyone convenient. Some people can work at home so they have more time to take care their family. I think in the near future I may not need to go to school , just turn on the computer then connect to internet and I can study and send my homework via internet likes this homework. What is the life ??
